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Gettysburg Address by Abraham Lincoln
Byrd Darryl
HPU
Course HIST 6602
11 Feb 2025
2
Daryl, the requirement requires you to append the document so I can examine the document you
looked at. The whole point of the assignment is to verify the precise document you examined and
establish its provenance an authenticity.
The chosen primary source is from the National Constitution Center, of the sources from
Abraham Lincoln Presidential Library and Museum. But the website does not present a full
version of the GA. The Gettysburg Address is one of the most important speeches in the history
of the USA because it was delivered on November 19, 1863, by the then-president of the USA,
Abraham Lincoln. It contained some of Lincoln's vision for the country during the Civil War and
after?. The speech signifies unity and equality for a nation in the dedication of freedom. Several
versions of this speech exist, each of which reflects language differences while still retaining the
quality of the original speech (National Constitution Center, 2018). Therefore, this paper will
study the provenance of the five major versions of the Gettysburg Address as enumerated by
Official, Hay, Everett, Bancroft, and Bliss by viewing "who," "what," "why," "when," "where,"
and "utility" of each document. OK – but without seeing the five examples yourself (they are not
listed on the website you are using), this is a meaningless endeavor. You are not evaluating a
primary source – you are simply regurgitating someone else’s (secondary) evaluation of the
differences between the copies. Without seeing them yourself, you cannot possibly know that
this description is accurate. Which is the entire purpose of the exercise. We try to know and
relate all these aspects to the historical context of these versions and their usefulness at large as
primary sources in historical research. To make this work for the assignment, is to find and
append the five copies and verify for yourself the differences for yourself.
Who
Abraham Lincoln served as the 16th President of America to pen The Gettysburg
Address. When the Soldiers' National Cemetery in Gettysburg staged its dedication event after
the Gettysburg conflict Lincoln appeared to deliver an elegant speech. The speech thanks the
3
dead soldiers while confirming that the Union supports a democratic government founded for
and by the people.
Various individuals transcribed multiple versions of the speech, which complicates its
historical origin. John Nicolay wrote down Lincoln's speech as his private secretary immediately
after it finished, and he produced The Official Version (National Constitution Center, 2018). The
transcription undertaken by Nicolay became the primary authoritative source for publishing this
speech after Lincoln delivered it. So find this copy and append it and verify for yourself the
differences between it and later versions (and most importantly discuss WHY you think the
differences exist.) The Hay Version has dual significance as an important early transcription
since it was created by John Hay, who worked with Nicolay. How is it different? When was it
copied? (you need to look at this version to verify its differences)
Several other drafts emerged from joint Lincoln-compiler and publisher work during his
lifetime. A version of the Gettysburg Address named after Edward Everett, who spoke at the
same event in Gettysburg, exists because of his notable speech there. Everett delivered a very
lengthy speech compared to Lincoln's address at Gettysburg, which was recorded during the
commemorative proceedings (National Constitution Center, 2018). So why is it named after
Everett? Did he transcribe the original? When? Where? The historian George Bancroft served as
the transcriber for Bancroft’s Version when did this happen? Why?, although Lincoln personally
approved Bliss’s Version as the official edition, why ?making it the most formal signed copy of
the speech. Who is Bliss? How did he come to transcribe the address?
These published versions demonstrate that Lincoln's speech evolved under the influence
of different individuals who completed the transcriptions resulting in variations between
accuracy and formal presentation. (OK, but since you have not looked at these versions, you
4
cannot know this for certain can you?) Since Nicolay and Hay worked near Lincoln at the time
of his speech, their transcriptions prove they were immediately authentic documents (National
Constitution Center, 2018). You mean they are considered to be the most accurate of the
versions?The later publications from Bancroft and Bliss when were these published? How did
they get published? tended to present official and refined versions that aligned with the interest
in creating permanent statements after Lincoln's death. So how were they different? What
statements did they desire to make? How can you know this?
What
As a political speech, The Gettysburg Address serves two goals, which are to
commemorate soldiers (whose? Ll?) at Gettysburg and reestablish the American dedication to
democratic principles. The Official Version, which Nicolay transcribed, stands as the most
authentic version of Lincoln's speech because it includes the famous phrase about people
governing themselves (National Constitutional Center, 2018). What makes it the official version?
Who decided that? When? Why? When did Nicolay transcribe it? The Hay Version, together
with the Everett Version, show minor differences in wording, although they maintain Lincoln's
fundamental thought process. OK – so the whole point of the exercise is to look at those ‘minor
differences’, identify them and explain them.
The Bancroft Version provides a polished rendition what does this mean? yet the Bliss
Version stands as the most popular version which appears in official publications. Why? The
documents found their way to memorials and archives because they represented Lincoln's dream
for nation unification symbolically. Again you are just copying what you read at the NCC. Since
you have not apparently looked at any of the five copies in their entirety, then you simply cannot
5
know that anything the NCC says is accurate – which is the entire point of the exercise! Nor
have you engaged with he differences between the copies.
Why
The Gettysburg Address served mainly to sanctify the cemetery while paying tribute to
the soldiers who perished during the Battle of Gettysburg. The speech by Lincoln functioned as a
brief but forceful statement showing both the ethical import and the governmental significance of
the Civil War. He aimed to show the nation what its fundamental principles were especially
equality for everyone.
After Lincoln gave his speech the subsequent versions were published to ensure his
words would survive. Multiple versions of the text were made and published as various
publications sought to record Lincoln's original statements during the ceremony or distribute his
words beyond the crowd and record political support or archival documentation (National
Constitutional Center, 2018). The Hay Version and Everett Version appeared shortly after the
event for speech memorialization purposes but the final versions emerged to create official
formal expressions for ceremonial and archival purposes. So we have not established the
chronological order of the iterations so the when remains unclear.
When
On November 19th of 1863, Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address at Gettysburg's
Soldiers' National Cemetery. The delivery took place during the American Civil War when
conflicting political views split the American people while lasting only a short time. Lincoln
strove to pay tribute to those who died while using his speech as a call to action for both Union
preservation and protection of liberty. The date is well known. The when that matters is WHEN
were each of the 5 iterations created/disseminated.
6
The different versions of the text were published at various times. Nicolay and Hay
recorded the Official Version of the address soon after Lincoln's speech, while the transcriptions
happened within weeks and days of the delivery. We need to know precisely – this is critically
important. The writers transcribed the Everett Version before it went into print right after the
ceremony. Bancroft released the most refined version in 1863 after its initial publication
(National Constitutional Center, 2018). After Lincoln approved the Bliss Version at the
beginning of 1864, it secured its place as the official version before it went to print in 1864. The
principal factors of Civil War chronology, along with public requirements for a unifying national
statement, determined how Lincoln's speech was recorded and distributed at that time. Again you
are simply regurgitating what the NCC says.
Where
The Gettysburg Address originated from Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, which contained the
grounds where one of the deadliest battles of the Civil War took place. The speech took place
outside at the Soldiers' National Cemetery on the ground, where many thousands suffered death
during battle. The place held great symbolism to Lincoln because he intended to bless the land in
which many Union soldiers sacrificed their lives.
Multiple versions of the speech were transcribed before they received their first print in
separate publishing sites. According to historical records, the production of The Official Version
and Hay Version took place in Washington, D.C., due to their connection with political settings.
The Bliss Version gained the most widespread reproduction after it emerged from the White
House thus indicating its official nature (National Constitutional Center, 2018). The geographic
environment where different versions originated or were published directly influenced their
reception. Washington, DC, served as the political headquarters, and Gettysburg functioned as
7
the spiritual center of the war initiative. But did where they were published influence the
differences that emerged between the versions? That is the key.
Utility
Less than twelve months after the Battle of Gettysburg President Lincoln wrote the
Gettysburg Address that focused on national unity together with equality and purpose while the
nation faced Civil War. Through this statement, Lincoln outlines his national goals, which value
both the United States' unity and individual freedoms. Several different recensions ? of the
document create doubts regarding its reliability (National Constitutional Center, 2018). And the
purpose of the exercise is for you to examine this concern about reliability and answer it. Which
is the most authentic version and why? The Bliss Version stands as the most authentic version
among the three – on what basis do you make this assessment? (You cannot, all you are doing is
parroting the NCC website. but the Everett and Hay Versions present recordings and adaptations
performed by different individuals. The original versions maintain low levels of subjective
influence?, yet institutional elements in the publication phase could influence the content?. How?
– again this is the critical analysis you need to do. A careful analysis of Lincoln's Gettysburg
Address requires researchers to handle various versions with caution due to the way they were
recorded and published during different stages of transmission. So which is the most
unadulterated and why?
Conclusion
Among the most important historical speeches in American history stands the Gettysburg
Address, which demonstrates the political, intellectual, and social climate of the Civil War period
through its different versions. Multiple versions of the speech provide us with valuable
information about the address's influence while explaining its formation of American public
8
opinion. The multiple versions present different word choices, but they showcase Lincoln’s
dedication to freedom and equality, which establishes them as essential historical documents
explaining both wartime conditions and the continuing relevance of the Gettysburg Address
.
References
National Constitutional Center. (2018). Read six different versions of the Gettysburg Address –
National Constitution Center. National Constitution Center – Constitutioncenter.org.
https://constitutioncenter.org/blog/read-six-different-versions-of-the-gettysburg-address
B- 12/15
Darryl,
You have not adreswed the assignment’s requirements properly. You have not looked at a full
copy of the GA nor directly at any of the other iterations. All you have done is to copy what the
NCC has to say. Without looking at the original primary sources yourself, you cannot know
whether what is says is true or not. Nor have you really attempted to identify the most authentic
copies by looking at the wording and its differences between the copies. No attempt ahs been
made to explain the differences between the copies. So you have not effectively established the
provenance of this source. It very explicitly calls for you to examine the primary source itsef
(and not just a snippet). Please read the requirements of assignments carefully and ask if you are
confused. This is your second attempt and you still have not fully grasped its requirements.
Copying what the NCC has to say is not what the assignment requires. It requires you to engage
closely with the original source and establish it provenance.
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Gettysburg Address by Abraham Lincoln
Byrd Darryl
HPU
Course HIST 6602
11 Feb 2025
2
Daryl, the requirement requires you to append the document so I can examine the document you
looked at. The whole point of the assignment is to verify the precise document you examined and
establish its provenance an authenticity.
The chosen primary source is from the National Constitution Center, of the sources from
Abraham Lincoln Presidential Library and Museum. But the website does not present a full
version of the GA. The Gettysburg Address is one of the most important speeches in the history
of the USA because it was delivered on November 19, 1863, by the then-president of the USA,
Abraham Lincoln. It contained some of Lincoln's vision for the country during the Civil War and
after?. The speech signifies unity and equality for a nation in the dedication of freedom. Several
versions of this speech exist, each of which reflects language differences while still retaining the
quality of the original speech (National Constitution Center, 2018). Therefore, this paper will
study the provenance of the five major versions of the Gettysburg Address as enumerated by
Official, Hay, Everett, Bancroft, and Bliss by viewing "who," "what," "why," "when," "where,"
and "utility" of each document. OK – but without seeing the five examples yourself (they are not
listed on the website you are using), this is a meaningless endeavor. You are not evaluating a
primary source – you are simply regurgitating someone else’s (secondary) evaluation of the
differences between the copies. Without seeing them yourself, you cannot possibly know that
this description is accurate. Which is the entire purpose of the exercise. We try to know and
relate all these aspects to the historical context of these versions and their usefulness at large as
primary sources in historical research. To make this work for the assignment, is to find and
append the five copies and verify for yourself the differences for yourself.
Who
Abraham Lincoln served as the 16th President of America to pen The Gettysburg
Address. When the Soldiers' National Cemetery in Gettysburg staged its dedication event after
the Gettysburg conflict Lincoln appeared to deliver an elegant speech. The speech thanks the
3
dead soldiers while confirming that the Union supports a democratic government founded for
and by the people.
Various individuals transcribed multiple versions of the speech, which complicates its
historical origin. John Nicolay wrote down Lincoln's speech as his private secretary immediately
after it finished, and he produced The Official Version (National Constitution Center, 2018). The
transcription undertaken by Nicolay became the primary authoritative source for publishing this
speech after Lincoln delivered it. So find this copy and append it and verify for yourself the
differences between it and later versions (and most importantly discuss WHY you think the
differences exist.) The Hay Version has dual significance as an important early transcription
since it was created by John Hay, who worked with Nicolay. How is it different? When was it
copied? (you need to look at this version to verify its differences)
Several other drafts emerged from joint Lincoln-compiler and publisher work during his
lifetime. A version of the Gettysburg Address named after Edward Everett, who spoke at the
same event in Gettysburg, exists because of his notable speech there. Everett delivered a very
lengthy speech compared to Lincoln's address at Gettysburg, which was recorded during the
commemorative proceedings (National Constitution Center, 2018). So why is it named after
Everett? Did he transcribe the original? When? Where? The historian George Bancroft served as
the transcriber for Bancroft’s Version when did this happen? Why?, although Lincoln personally
approved Bliss’s Version as the official edition, why ?making it the most formal signed copy of
the speech. Who is Bliss? How did he come to transcribe the address?
These published versions demonstrate that Lincoln's speech evolved under the influence
of different individuals who completed the transcriptions resulting in variations between
accuracy and formal presentation. (OK, but since you have not looked at these versions, you
4
cannot know this for certain can you?) Since Nicolay and Hay worked near Lincoln at the time
of his speech, their transcriptions prove they were immediately authentic documents (National
Constitution Center, 2018). You mean they are considered to be the most accurate of the
versions?The later publications from Bancroft and Bliss when were these published? How did
they get published? tended to present official and refined versions that aligned with the interest
in creating permanent statements after Lincoln's death. So how were they different? What
statements did they desire to make? How can you know this?
What
As a political speech, The Gettysburg Address serves two goals, which are to
commemorate soldiers (whose? Ll?) at Gettysburg and reestablish the American dedication to
democratic principles. The Official Version, which Nicolay transcribed, stands as the most
authentic version of Lincoln's speech because it includes the famous phrase about people
governing themselves (National Constitutional Center, 2018). What makes it the official version?
Who decided that? When? Why? When did Nicolay transcribe it? The Hay Version, together
with the Everett Version, show minor differences in wording, although they maintain Lincoln's
fundamental thought process. OK – so the whole point of the exercise is to look at those ‘minor
differences’, identify them and explain them.
The Bancroft Version provides a polished rendition what does this mean? yet the Bliss
Version stands as the most popular version which appears in official publications. Why? The
documents found their way to memorials and archives because they represented Lincoln's dream
for nation unification symbolically. Again you are just copying what you read at the NCC. Since
you have not apparently looked at any of the five copies in their entirety, then you simply cannot
5
know that anything the NCC says is accurate – which is the entire point of the exercise! Nor
have you engaged with he differences between the copies.
Why
The Gettysburg Address served mainly to sanctify the cemetery while paying tribute to
the soldiers who perished during the Battle of Gettysburg. The speech by Lincoln functioned as a
brief but forceful statement showing both the ethical import and the governmental significance of
the Civil War. He aimed to show the nation what its fundamental principles were especially
equality for everyone.
After Lincoln gave his speech the subsequent versions were published to ensure his
words would survive. Multiple versions of the text were made and published as various
publications sought to record Lincoln's original statements during the ceremony or distribute his
words beyond the crowd and record political support or archival documentation (National
Constitutional Center, 2018). The Hay Version and Everett Version appeared shortly after the
event for speech memorialization purposes but the final versions emerged to create official
formal expressions for ceremonial and archival purposes. So we have not established the
chronological order of the iterations so the when remains unclear.
When
On November 19th of 1863, Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address at Gettysburg's
Soldiers' National Cemetery. The delivery took place during the American Civil War when
conflicting political views split the American people while lasting only a short time. Lincoln
strove to pay tribute to those who died while using his speech as a call to action for both Union
preservation and protection of liberty. The date is well known. The when that matters is WHEN
were each of the 5 iterations created/disseminated.
6
The different versions of the text were published at various times. Nicolay and Hay
recorded the Official Version of the address soon after Lincoln's speech, while the transcriptions
happened within weeks and days of the delivery. We need to know precisely – this is critically
important. The writers transcribed the Everett Version before it went into print right after the
ceremony. Bancroft released the most refined version in 1863 after its initial publication
(National Constitutional Center, 2018). After Lincoln approved the Bliss Version at the
beginning of 1864, it secured its place as the official version before it went to print in 1864. The
principal factors of Civil War chronology, along with public requirements for a unifying national
statement, determined how Lincoln's speech was recorded and distributed at that time. Again you
are simply regurgitating what the NCC says.
Where
The Gettysburg Address originated from Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, which contained the
grounds where one of the deadliest battles of the Civil War took place. The speech took place
outside at the Soldiers' National Cemetery on the ground, where many thousands suffered death
during battle. The place held great symbolism to Lincoln because he intended to bless the land in
which many Union soldiers sacrificed their lives.
Multiple versions of the speech were transcribed before they received their first print in
separate publishing sites. According to historical records, the production of The Official Version
and Hay Version took place in Washington, D.C., due to their connection with political settings.
The Bliss Version gained the most widespread reproduction after it emerged from the White
House thus indicating its official nature (National Constitutional Center, 2018). The geographic
environment where different versions originated or were published directly influenced their
reception. Washington, DC, served as the political headquarters, and Gettysburg functioned as
7
the spiritual center of the war initiative. But did where they were published influence the
differences that emerged between the versions? That is the key.
Utility
Less than twelve months after the Battle of Gettysburg President Lincoln wrote the
Gettysburg Address that focused on national unity together with equality and purpose while the
nation faced Civil War. Through this statement, Lincoln outlines his national goals, which value
both the United States' unity and individual freedoms. Several different recensions ? of the
document create doubts regarding its reliability (National Constitutional Center, 2018). And the
purpose of the exercise is for you to examine this concern about reliability and answer it. Which
is the most authentic version and why? The Bliss Version stands as the most authentic version
among the three – on what basis do you make this assessment? (You cannot, all you are doing is
parroting the NCC website. but the Everett and Hay Versions present recordings and adaptations
performed by different individuals. The original versions maintain low levels of subjective
influence?, yet institutional elements in the publication phase could influence the content?. How?
– again this is the critical analysis you need to do. A careful analysis of Lincoln's Gettysburg
Address requires researchers to handle various versions with caution due to the way they were
recorded and published during different stages of transmission. So which is the most
unadulterated and why?
Conclusion
Among the most important historical speeches in American history stands the Gettysburg
Address, which demonstrates the political, intellectual, and social climate of the Civil War period
through its different versions. Multiple versions of the speech provide us with valuable
information about the address's influence while explaining its formation of American public
8
opinion. The multiple versions present different word choices, but they showcase Lincoln’s
dedication to freedom and equality, which establishes them as essential historical documents
explaining both wartime conditions and the continuing relevance of the Gettysburg Address
.
References
National Constitutional Center. (2018). Read six different versions of the Gettysburg Address –
National Constitution Center. National Constitution Center – Constitutioncenter.org.
https://constitutioncenter.org/blog/read-six-different-versions-of-the-gettysburg-address
B- 12/15
Darryl,
You have not adreswed the assignment’s requirements properly. You have not looked at a full
copy of the GA nor directly at any of the other iterations. All you have done is to copy what the
NCC has to say. Without looking at the original primary sources yourself, you cannot know
whether what is says is true or not. Nor have you really attempted to identify the most authentic
copies by looking at the wording and its differences between the copies. No attempt ahs been
made to explain the differences between the copies. So you have not effectively established the
provenance of this source. It very explicitly calls for you to examine the primary source itsef
(and not just a snippet). Please read the requirements of assignments carefully and ask if you are
confused. This is your second attempt and you still have not fully grasped its requirements.
Copying what the NCC has to say is not what the assignment requires. It requires you to engage
closely with the original source and establish it provenance.
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1
Gettysburg Address by Abraham Lincoln
Byrd Darryl
HPU
Course HIST 6602
11 Feb 2025
2
Daryl, the requirement requires you to append the document so I can examine the document you
looked at. The whole point of the assignment is to verify the precise document you examined and
establish its provenance an authenticity.
The chosen primary source is from the National Constitution Center, of the sources from
Abraham Lincoln Presidential Library and Museum. But the website does not present a full
version of the GA. The Gettysburg Address is one of the most important speeches in the history
of the USA because it was delivered on November 19, 1863, by the then-president of the USA,
Abraham Lincoln. It contained some of Lincoln's vision for the country during the Civil War and
after?. The speech signifies unity and equality for a nation in the dedication of freedom. Several
versions of this speech exist, each of which reflects language differences while still retaining the
quality of the original speech (National Constitution Center, 2018). Therefore, this paper will
study the provenance of the five major versions of the Gettysburg Address as enumerated by
Official, Hay, Everett, Bancroft, and Bliss by viewing "who," "what," "why," "when," "where,"
and "utility" of each document. OK – but without seeing the five examples yourself (they are not
listed on the website you are using), this is a meaningless endeavor. You are not evaluating a
primary source – you are simply regurgitating someone else’s (secondary) evaluation of the
differences between the copies. Without seeing them yourself, you cannot possibly know that
this description is accurate. Which is the entire purpose of the exercise. We try to know and
relate all these aspects to the historical context of these versions and their usefulness at large as
primary sources in historical research. To make this work for the assignment, is to find and
append the five copies and verify for yourself the differences for yourself.
Who
Abraham Lincoln served as the 16th President of America to pen The Gettysburg
Address. When the Soldiers' National Cemetery in Gettysburg staged its dedication event after
the Gettysburg conflict Lincoln appeared to deliver an elegant speech. The speech thanks the
3
dead soldiers while confirming that the Union supports a democratic government founded for
and by the people.
Various individuals transcribed multiple versions of the speech, which complicates its
historical origin. John Nicolay wrote down Lincoln's speech as his private secretary immediately
after it finished, and he produced The Official Version (National Constitution Center, 2018). The
transcription undertaken by Nicolay became the primary authoritative source for publishing this
speech after Lincoln delivered it. So find this copy and append it and verify for yourself the
differences between it and later versions (and most importantly discuss WHY you think the
differences exist.) The Hay Version has dual significance as an important early transcription
since it was created by John Hay, who worked with Nicolay. How is it different? When was it
copied? (you need to look at this version to verify its differences)
Several other drafts emerged from joint Lincoln-compiler and publisher work during his
lifetime. A version of the Gettysburg Address named after Edward Everett, who spoke at the
same event in Gettysburg, exists because of his notable speech there. Everett delivered a very
lengthy speech compared to Lincoln's address at Gettysburg, which was recorded during the
commemorative proceedings (National Constitution Center, 2018). So why is it named after
Everett? Did he transcribe the original? When? Where? The historian George Bancroft served as
the transcriber for Bancroft’s Version when did this happen? Why?, although Lincoln personally
approved Bliss’s Version as the official edition, why ?making it the most formal signed copy of
the speech. Who is Bliss? How did he come to transcribe the address?
These published versions demonstrate that Lincoln's speech evolved under the influence
of different individuals who completed the transcriptions resulting in variations between
accuracy and formal presentation. (OK, but since you have not looked at these versions, you
4
cannot know this for certain can you?) Since Nicolay and Hay worked near Lincoln at the time
of his speech, their transcriptions prove they were immediately authentic documents (National
Constitution Center, 2018). You mean they are considered to be the most accurate of the
versions?The later publications from Bancroft and Bliss when were these published? How did
they get published? tended to present official and refined versions that aligned with the interest
in creating permanent statements after Lincoln's death. So how were they different? What
statements did they desire to make? How can you know this?
What
As a political speech, The Gettysburg Address serves two goals, which are to
commemorate soldiers (whose? Ll?) at Gettysburg and reestablish the American dedication to
democratic principles. The Official Version, which Nicolay transcribed, stands as the most
authentic version of Lincoln's speech because it includes the famous phrase about people
governing themselves (National Constitutional Center, 2018). What makes it the official version?
Who decided that? When? Why? When did Nicolay transcribe it? The Hay Version, together
with the Everett Version, show minor differences in wording, although they maintain Lincoln's
fundamental thought process. OK – so the whole point of the exercise is to look at those ‘minor
differences’, identify them and explain them.
The Bancroft Version provides a polished rendition what does this mean? yet the Bliss
Version stands as the most popular version which appears in official publications. Why? The
documents found their way to memorials and archives because they represented Lincoln's dream
for nation unification symbolically. Again you are just copying what you read at the NCC. Since
you have not apparently looked at any of the five copies in their entirety, then you simply cannot
5
know that anything the NCC says is accurate – which is the entire point of the exercise! Nor
have you engaged with he differences between the copies.
Why
The Gettysburg Address served mainly to sanctify the cemetery while paying tribute to
the soldiers who perished during the Battle of Gettysburg. The speech by Lincoln functioned as a
brief but forceful statement showing both the ethical import and the governmental significance of
the Civil War. He aimed to show the nation what its fundamental principles were especially
equality for everyone.
After Lincoln gave his speech the subsequent versions were published to ensure his
words would survive. Multiple versions of the text were made and published as various
publications sought to record Lincoln's original statements during the ceremony or distribute his
words beyond the crowd and record political support or archival documentation (National
Constitutional Center, 2018). The Hay Version and Everett Version appeared shortly after the
event for speech memorialization purposes but the final versions emerged to create official
formal expressions for ceremonial and archival purposes. So we have not established the
chronological order of the iterations so the when remains unclear.
When
On November 19th of 1863, Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address at Gettysburg's
Soldiers' National Cemetery. The delivery took place during the American Civil War when
conflicting political views split the American people while lasting only a short time. Lincoln
strove to pay tribute to those who died while using his speech as a call to action for both Union
preservation and protection of liberty. The date is well known. The when that matters is WHEN
were each of the 5 iterations created/disseminated.
6
The different versions of the text were published at various times. Nicolay and Hay
recorded the Official Version of the address soon after Lincoln's speech, while the transcriptions
happened within weeks and days of the delivery. We need to know precisely – this is critically
important. The writers transcribed the Everett Version before it went into print right after the
ceremony. Bancroft released the most refined version in 1863 after its initial publication
(National Constitutional Center, 2018). After Lincoln approved the Bliss Version at the
beginning of 1864, it secured its place as the official version before it went to print in 1864. The
principal factors of Civil War chronology, along with public requirements for a unifying national
statement, determined how Lincoln's speech was recorded and distributed at that time. Again you
are simply regurgitating what the NCC says.
Where
The Gettysburg Address originated from Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, which contained the
grounds where one of the deadliest battles of the Civil War took place. The speech took place
outside at the Soldiers' National Cemetery on the ground, where many thousands suffered death
during battle. The place held great symbolism to Lincoln because he intended to bless the land in
which many Union soldiers sacrificed their lives.
Multiple versions of the speech were transcribed before they received their first print in
separate publishing sites. According to historical records, the production of The Official Version
and Hay Version took place in Washington, D.C., due to their connection with political settings.
The Bliss Version gained the most widespread reproduction after it emerged from the White
House thus indicating its official nature (National Constitutional Center, 2018). The geographic
environment where different versions originated or were published directly influenced their
reception. Washington, DC, served as the political headquarters, and Gettysburg functioned as
7
the spiritual center of the war initiative. But did where they were published influence the
differences that emerged between the versions? That is the key.
Utility
Less than twelve months after the Battle of Gettysburg President Lincoln wrote the
Gettysburg Address that focused on national unity together with equality and purpose while the
nation faced Civil War. Through this statement, Lincoln outlines his national goals, which value
both the United States' unity and individual freedoms. Several different recensions ? of the
document create doubts regarding its reliability (National Constitutional Center, 2018). And the
purpose of the exercise is for you to examine this concern about reliability and answer it. Which
is the most authentic version and why? The Bliss Version stands as the most authentic version
among the three – on what basis do you make this assessment? (You cannot, all you are doing is
parroting the NCC website. but the Everett and Hay Versions present recordings and adaptations
performed by different individuals. The original versions maintain low levels of subjective
influence?, yet institutional elements in the publication phase could influence the content?. How?
– again this is the critical analysis you need to do. A careful analysis of Lincoln's Gettysburg
Address requires researchers to handle various versions with caution due to the way they were
recorded and published during different stages of transmission. So which is the most
unadulterated and why?
Conclusion
Among the most important historical speeches in American history stands the Gettysburg
Address, which demonstrates the political, intellectual, and social climate of the Civil War period
through its different versions. Multiple versions of the speech provide us with valuable
information about the address's influence while explaining its formation of American public
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opinion. The multiple versions present different word choices, but they showcase Lincoln’s
dedication to freedom and equality, which establishes them as essential historical documents
explaining both wartime conditions and the continuing relevance of the Gettysburg Address
.
References
National Constitutional Center. (2018). Read six different versions of the Gettysburg Address –
National Constitution Center. National Constitution Center – Constitutioncenter.org.
https://constitutioncenter.org/blog/read-six-different-versions-of-the-gettysburg-address
B- 12/15
Darryl,
You have not adreswed the assignment’s requirements properly. You have not looked at a full
copy of the GA nor directly at any of the other iterations. All you have done is to copy what the
NCC has to say. Without looking at the original primary sources yourself, you cannot know
whether what is says is true or not. Nor have you really attempted to identify the most authentic
copies by looking at the wording and its differences between the copies. No attempt ahs been
made to explain the differences between the copies. So you have not effectively established the
provenance of this source. It very explicitly calls for you to examine the primary source itsef
(and not just a snippet). Please read the requirements of assignments carefully and ask if you are
confused. This is your second attempt and you still have not fully grasped its requirements.
Copying what the NCC has to say is not what the assignment requires. It requires you to engage
closely with the original source and establish it provenance.
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Gettysburg Address by Abraham Lincoln
Byrd Darryl
HPU
Course HIST 6602
11 Feb 2025
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Daryl, the requirement requires you to append the document so I can examine the document you
looked at. The whole point of the assignment is to verify the precise document you examined and
establish its provenance an authenticity.
The chosen primary source is from the National Constitution Center, of the sources from
Abraham Lincoln Presidential Library and Museum. But the website does not present a full
version of the GA. The Gettysburg Address is one of the most important speeches in the history
of the USA because it was delivered on November 19, 1863, by the then-president of the USA,
Abraham Lincoln. It contained some of Lincoln's vision for the country during the Civil War and
after?. The speech signifies unity and equality for a nation in the dedication of freedom. Several
versions of this speech exist, each of which reflects language differences while still retaining the
quality of the original speech (National Constitution Center, 2018). Therefore, this paper will
study the provenance of the five major versions of the Gettysburg Address as enumerated by
Official, Hay, Everett, Bancroft, and Bliss by viewing "who," "what," "why," "when," "where,"
and "utility" of each document. OK – but without seeing the five examples yourself (they are not
listed on the website you are using), this is a meaningless endeavor. You are not evaluating a
primary source – you are simply regurgitating someone else’s (secondary) evaluation of the
differences between the copies. Without seeing them yourself, you cannot possibly know that
this description is accurate. Which is the entire purpose of the exercise. We try to know and
relate all these aspects to the historical context of these versions and their usefulness at large as
primary sources in historical research. To make this work for the assignment, is to find and
append the five copies and verify for yourself the differences for yourself.
Who
Abraham Lincoln served as the 16th President of America to pen The Gettysburg
Address. When the Soldiers' National Cemetery in Gettysburg staged its dedication event after
the Gettysburg conflict Lincoln appeared to deliver an elegant speech. The speech thanks the
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dead soldiers while confirming that the Union supports a democratic government founded for
and by the people.
Various individuals transcribed multiple versions of the speech, which complicates its
historical origin. John Nicolay wrote down Lincoln's speech as his private secretary immediately
after it finished, and he produced The Official Version (National Constitution Center, 2018). The
transcription undertaken by Nicolay became the primary authoritative source for publishing this
speech after Lincoln delivered it. So find this copy and append it and verify for yourself the
differences between it and later versions (and most importantly discuss WHY you think the
differences exist.) The Hay Version has dual significance as an important early transcription
since it was created by John Hay, who worked with Nicolay. How is it different? When was it
copied? (you need to look at this version to verify its differences)
Several other drafts emerged from joint Lincoln-compiler and publisher work during his
lifetime. A version of the Gettysburg Address named after Edward Everett, who spoke at the
same event in Gettysburg, exists because of his notable speech there. Everett delivered a very
lengthy speech compared to Lincoln's address at Gettysburg, which was recorded during the
commemorative proceedings (National Constitution Center, 2018). So why is it named after
Everett? Did he transcribe the original? When? Where? The historian George Bancroft served as
the transcriber for Bancroft’s Version when did this happen? Why?, although Lincoln personally
approved Bliss’s Version as the official edition, why ?making it the most formal signed copy of
the speech. Who is Bliss? How did he come to transcribe the address?
These published versions demonstrate that Lincoln's speech evolved under the influence
of different individuals who completed the transcriptions resulting in variations between
accuracy and formal presentation. (OK, but since you have not looked at these versions, you
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cannot know this for certain can you?) Since Nicolay and Hay worked near Lincoln at the time
of his speech, their transcriptions prove they were immediately authentic documents (National
Constitution Center, 2018). You mean they are considered to be the most accurate of the
versions?The later publications from Bancroft and Bliss when were these published? How did
they get published? tended to present official and refined versions that aligned with the interest
in creating permanent statements after Lincoln's death. So how were they different? What
statements did they desire to make? How can you know this?
What
As a political speech, The Gettysburg Address serves two goals, which are to
commemorate soldiers (whose? Ll?) at Gettysburg and reestablish the American dedication to
democratic principles. The Official Version, which Nicolay transcribed, stands as the most
authentic version of Lincoln's speech because it includes the famous phrase about people
governing themselves (National Constitutional Center, 2018). What makes it the official version?
Who decided that? When? Why? When did Nicolay transcribe it? The Hay Version, together
with the Everett Version, show minor differences in wording, although they maintain Lincoln's
fundamental thought process. OK – so the whole point of the exercise is to look at those ‘minor
differences’, identify them and explain them.
The Bancroft Version provides a polished rendition what does this mean? yet the Bliss
Version stands as the most popular version which appears in official publications. Why? The
documents found their way to memorials and archives because they represented Lincoln's dream
for nation unification symbolically. Again you are just copying what you read at the NCC. Since
you have not apparently looked at any of the five copies in their entirety, then you simply cannot
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know that anything the NCC says is accurate – which is the entire point of the exercise! Nor
have you engaged with he differences between the copies.
Why
The Gettysburg Address served mainly to sanctify the cemetery while paying tribute to
the soldiers who perished during the Battle of Gettysburg. The speech by Lincoln functioned as a
brief but forceful statement showing both the ethical import and the governmental significance of
the Civil War. He aimed to show the nation what its fundamental principles were especially
equality for everyone.
After Lincoln gave his speech the subsequent versions were published to ensure his
words would survive. Multiple versions of the text were made and published as various
publications sought to record Lincoln's original statements during the ceremony or distribute his
words beyond the crowd and record political support or archival documentation (National
Constitutional Center, 2018). The Hay Version and Everett Version appeared shortly after the
event for speech memorialization purposes but the final versions emerged to create official
formal expressions for ceremonial and archival purposes. So we have not established the
chronological order of the iterations so the when remains unclear.
When
On November 19th of 1863, Lincoln delivered the Gettysburg Address at Gettysburg's
Soldiers' National Cemetery. The delivery took place during the American Civil War when
conflicting political views split the American people while lasting only a short time. Lincoln
strove to pay tribute to those who died while using his speech as a call to action for both Union
preservation and protection of liberty. The date is well known. The when that matters is WHEN
were each of the 5 iterations created/disseminated.
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The different versions of the text were published at various times. Nicolay and Hay
recorded the Official Version of the address soon after Lincoln's speech, while the transcriptions
happened within weeks and days of the delivery. We need to know precisely – this is critically
important. The writers transcribed the Everett Version before it went into print right after the
ceremony. Bancroft released the most refined version in 1863 after its initial publication
(National Constitutional Center, 2018). After Lincoln approved the Bliss Version at the
beginning of 1864, it secured its place as the official version before it went to print in 1864. The
principal factors of Civil War chronology, along with public requirements for a unifying national
statement, determined how Lincoln's speech was recorded and distributed at that time. Again you
are simply regurgitating what the NCC says.
Where
The Gettysburg Address originated from Gettysburg, Pennsylvania, which contained the
grounds where one of the deadliest battles of the Civil War took place. The speech took place
outside at the Soldiers' National Cemetery on the ground, where many thousands suffered death
during battle. The place held great symbolism to Lincoln because he intended to bless the land in
which many Union soldiers sacrificed their lives.
Multiple versions of the speech were transcribed before they received their first print in
separate publishing sites. According to historical records, the production of The Official Version
and Hay Version took place in Washington, D.C., due to their connection with political settings.
The Bliss Version gained the most widespread reproduction after it emerged from the White
House thus indicating its official nature (National Constitutional Center, 2018). The geographic
environment where different versions originated or were published directly influenced their
reception. Washington, DC, served as the political headquarters, and Gettysburg functioned as
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the spiritual center of the war initiative. But did where they were published influence the
differences that emerged between the versions? That is the key.
Utility
Less than twelve months after the Battle of Gettysburg President Lincoln wrote the
Gettysburg Address that focused on national unity together with equality and purpose while the
nation faced Civil War. Through this statement, Lincoln outlines his national goals, which value
both the United States' unity and individual freedoms. Several different recensions ? of the
document create doubts regarding its reliability (National Constitutional Center, 2018). And the
purpose of the exercise is for you to examine this concern about reliability and answer it. Which
is the most authentic version and why? The Bliss Version stands as the most authentic version
among the three – on what basis do you make this assessment? (You cannot, all you are doing is
parroting the NCC website. but the Everett and Hay Versions present recordings and adaptations
performed by different individuals. The original versions maintain low levels of subjective
influence?, yet institutional elements in the publication phase could influence the content?. How?
– again this is the critical analysis you need to do. A careful analysis of Lincoln's Gettysburg
Address requires researchers to handle various versions with caution due to the way they were
recorded and published during different stages of transmission. So which is the most
unadulterated and why?
Conclusion
Among the most important historical speeches in American history stands the Gettysburg
Address, which demonstrates the political, intellectual, and social climate of the Civil War period
through its different versions. Multiple versions of the speech provide us with valuable
information about the address's influence while explaining its formation of American public
8
opinion. The multiple versions present different word choices, but they showcase Lincoln’s
dedication to freedom and equality, which establishes them as essential historical documents
explaining both wartime conditions and the continuing relevance of the Gettysburg Address
.
References
National Constitutional Center. (2018). Read six different versions of the Gettysburg Address –
National Constitution Center. National Constitution Center – Constitutioncenter.org.
https://constitutioncenter.org/blog/read-six-different-versions-of-the-gettysburg-address
B- 12/15
Darryl,
You have not adreswed the assignment’s requirements properly. You have not looked at a full
copy of the GA nor directly at any of the other iterations. All you have done is to copy what the
NCC has to say. Without looking at the original primary sources yourself, you cannot know
whether what is says is true or not. Nor have you really attempted to identify the most authentic
copies by looking at the wording and its differences between the copies. No attempt ahs been
made to explain the differences between the copies. So you have not effectively established the
provenance of this source. It very explicitly calls for you to examine the primary source itsef
(and not just a snippet). Please read the requirements of assignments carefully and ask if you are
confused. This is your second attempt and you still have not fully grasped its requirements.
Copying what the NCC has to say is not what the assignment requires. It requires you to engage
closely with the original source and establish it provenance.